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I like the formatting of this, getting longer, than circling around back to the main point. Keeps everything flowing at a nice pace.
That's really the only criticism I can levy. All in all, I can't really see anything bad in this piece. In fact, not only is it good on its own merits, but it excels above and beyond that simply for being something uplifting and encouraging. A rarity among many poems I must admit. For that alone, I would probably give full marks, but the way you write it also makes the piece feel personal to each person I think. Overall, a good piece indeed.
Thank you very much for this incredibly generous critique. I appreciate feedback and I'm glad you liked it.
You're very welcome! I urge you to write more like it. It's a welcome sight to see uplifting pieces now and again to break the monotony of dark, brooding, angry ones. And I thank you for writing it.